I have to say it's great not to be in the office today. Almost feels like being normal (perish the thought). Here's today's poem:
To start the day:
a good stoning.
Cover your ears
and let sharp rocks
blanket the words
that pierce you most
while the rough cloaks
lie heavy in your arms.
My, Saul of Tarsus/St Paul could be a bloodthirsty man on occasion. And really I can't blame him - Stephen the Martyr did go on so. If I'd been there, I might well have stoned him myself. Just to shut him up. Hush my mouth.
Anyway, I'm pleased to say that Maloney's Law has received a five star review on Amazon US, which you can read below:
“This is one compelling and riveting story. I could not put it down. Paul is one tortured soul and his mesmerizing narration grips me from page 1. International intrigues, heart stopping plot, gut wrenching love, a heart tugging friendship, Maloney's Law has it all. Paul is such a complex character. Flawed and pitiful when it comes to his obsessive love for a man who could never reciprocate. Yet without a thought for his life when his search for the truth drives him on. His tragic loss since childhood, his plunge into despair, his sense of justice, his struggle to live on, all these powerfully expressed by the writer. Just brilliant and I look forward to reading the sequel, The Bones of Summer, and more from Anne Brooke. My only regret is that I should have read this earlier.”
Gosh, thank you, R Parkland - so glad you enjoyed the read!
I've also received my proof copy of Salt and Gold and have made one or two corrections and lowered the price to £3.50 for the paperback. So I've asked for another proof copy and will wait to see what that looks like before I go properly public. As it were.
For the rest of the day, I've been continuing the edit of The Hit List and am now happily on p50. Which is roughly one-eighth through. Yes, I do need to cut drastically, as it's quite long for a comedy romance (which is what I'm now intending to make it, rather than comedy crime). We'll see how things shape up as we go on, as they say.
I've also had my back realigned at my Alexander Technique lesson - and goodness me but it needed it after two flights and a tense work week. I think I was all but Toblerone shaped when I walked in, but rather more normal (ho ho) when the lesson had finished. I have to think about inhabiting my space more, apparently. Trouble is, I do find people difficult (they're stealing my space, they're stealing it!) so I tend to duck down and shy away from them, especially if I don't know them. Which of course leads inevitably to a hunched back and a very stiff neck. Sigh. What a lot there is to relearn indeed. On oh so many levels.
Today's nice things:
2. The review of Maloney's Law
3. Tweaking Salt and Gold
4. Editing The Hit List
5. Alexander Technique.
Anne Brooke - conserving her sense of her own space to the best of her limited ability
Maloney's Law - a tortured soul made good ...
Nice review, well chuffed for you.
I know what you mean about using our own space. Pople just seem to take up too much of it... the naughty folk!
Thanks, Jason! And I shall have to start a campaign for more space, tee hee!
Yes some of those saints are just soooo tedious! I can quite see why some of them ended up suitably punished as they must have been incredibly difficult to live with - maybe there's a story in there somewhere??
I did think the crime in The Hit List felt as though it was added on afterwards - as I said to you when I'd read it. I shall be interested to read it its revised format.
Probably, Jilly! An alternative volume of bible stories!!?!
And yes I do think you're right - I'm attempting to bring out the romance of THL, and I'll ditch the crime when I get there - I think it's the stress in Jamie's head more than anything, and I'm making him nicer. I hope!!
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